Proofreading typos
Hey, I read it and I liked it! Thanks! I'm not able to produce a real proofread because of my low-skill in English, but I could notice missing characters (mistyping) and use my e-reader annotation to remember the things like incomplete words, punctuation or sentence. Unfortunately; the annotation of my tablet list only the words I underlined but with a quick search, I'm sure you'll find the words. Here is the content of my underlining:
Chapter "a day's journey"
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at one moment there is a
can lea
probably a "can lead"? -
trying ti multi
( maybe "to" ) -
into longer-term storag
Chapter "the map is not the territory"
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a die
(maybe a dice?) -
with the.
(end of line missing)
Chapter "the struggle within"
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attachment the
(maybe "attachment to the") -
buoy us along
(buoy?)
That's all!