Tp ep11
OK, this took me a while. =)
- Tokiponization of names was easy enough, with the exception of Thyme, which I would have liked as jan Time, but ti is illegal. Sime wouldn't have preserved enough of the original sounds, so I went with Tume for now.
- For the godmothers, I went with "wise people", jan sona
- Fear, intimidation, respect and scare were difficult words, because I'm still trying to exclude non-pu words. As predicted, monsuta would have been very useful, but instead I went with what effect the fears should have instead of a direct translation.
- I didn't translate "mean" as "mean" (idk, ike something). It's not like Chaosah comes across as absolute evil. Instead, I used "wielding evil-related power", and Pepper picks it up as "evilness is bad" - this way, it's a possible misinterpretation on Pepper's part (but also potentially not a misinterpretation if the later series goes more evil).
- Onomatopoeia using toki pona words seems to work, still. Might have to revise the earlier episodes.