Episodes 4 and 5 translated in Toki Pona
Expected failure:
I had to duplicate a text field in E05P04 and I fully expect the transcript to throw out a similar error to last time. I added the extra text field because I couldn't figure out another way to change the perspective.
Translation notes
- Whoops. Looks like I need to be careful with the space there is in the credits.^^
- There's a grand total of 3 Pu words beginning with "e", so my workaround was to concentrate on "m" in E04P07. So that part might not count as a pure translation.
- Still trying out onomatopoeia. Fun tidbit: E04P02 has "mumoku" (mu+moku). Someone suggested "moku" instead of "Kulu" in Episode 3, maybe mumoku could also be an alternative?
- I also hope "O Sole Mu" won't be mistaken for an o-phrase with "sole" as a new word... At least the nimi ale list doesn't show it as having ever been suggested.
- I have (hopefully) corrected the order in the Ep. 3 transcript
- I have also changed tenpo Lojemun to tenpo Pinimun to get closer to "PM", and I guess something like tenpo Anpamun could be the translation for AM