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[ep29/en] Improve initial translation

Martin Disch requested to merge ep29-en-improvements into master

I tried to keep the changes as minimal as possible to prevent conflicts, since I'm sure Craig is already hard at work on his version 😉 I only found very few things I feel confident enough to improve, I'll leave the instances where it's a bit more tricky to make it sound natural to Craig's judgement.

Notable changes:

  • Using the common way of writing light-years
  • Preferring double quotes (") over single ones (') like it's usually done in American writing
  • Making a few expressions sound a bit more natural

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