[Episode 27] Add several improvements and fixes (!121) · Merge requests · peppercarrot / webcomics · GitLab

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Martin Disch requested to merge ep27-en-corrections into master Oct 13, 2018

Some things I noticed while proofreading the episode.

Fixed typos
Added commas
Exchanged word positions for more natural sounding sentences
Improved consistency ('coronation ceremony' everywhere)
Replaced some phrases with more common ones
Moved and resized some speech bubbles in the process

ref: #69 (closed)