Episode 24 beta
Hi!
Episode 24 codenamed "The XXXX tree" entered BETA step and is ready to receive feedback and enhancements. But the episode is not ready to be translated and also don't reshared it online as it is (artworks will needs another 10 days of work to be "final"). Thank you. I propose you to directly read the beta episode to keep a fresh mind, then read the other part of this post :
How you can help:
Just write your feedback(s) on this thread. You can attach pictures, discuss and freely write your proposals. Together, I believe we can enhance this episode to something better, that's why I think this step is important. Here are the three main topics:
- Storytelling: Read the beta version (at the end) and report your critics and proposals of enhancement.
- English dialogs Propose better dialogs, more natural sentences and more correct English.
- Artworks Your feedback about the drawings -even at this speedpainting beta step- are also welcome!
Specific issue in this episode:
- Title: I need a title! It will also allow me to get a folder name and commit the SVG to the webcomics/ repository.
- The XXXXXX Tree is a placeholder name. I'm looking for a name audience could directly know they are speaking of a Xmas Tree without using "Xmas" (not part of the Pepper&Carrot world). I'm open to any type of brainstorming!
- Last catch phrase : Pepper is worrying about her exam... Maybe something more funny?
- Micro-dimension : Maybe a specific sound when entering and escaping it? Does it make you think about containerized apps? xD
Schedule
Beta need to end next week 8 December to enter into translation-ready mode. It means english dialog, final title and all needs to be "frozen" before next week 8 December. Final release will be around 13/14 or 15 December.
Thanks for the help! I hope you'll like it