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Opened Sep 04, 2016 by David Revoy@DeevadOwner

the-most-powerfull-magic.md

Hey,

About the the story proposed by Seryan here: https://framagit.org/peppercarrot/scenarios/blob/master/episodes/drafts/the-most-powerfull-magic.md

There is multiple issue:

[] Too long dialogs

[] Cayenne is a little bit too extreme, but I also like it a bit. Is it possible to smooth her way to talk?

[] The ending is weak.

So... what to keep? The start is interesting: Pepper is asking question about Chaosah to Cayenne. Cayenne is asking Pepper to show her most powerfull magic. I think it has potential visually.

Edited Nov 11, 2017 by David Revoy
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Reference: peppercarrot/scenarios#1