Commit b5bd5f3e authored by Midgard's avatar Midgard
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Correct spelling and grammar, stylistic improvements

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* **Age**: 14
* **Magic**: Chaosah
* **Place**: Her house, in the forest of Squirrel's End ( a little farmer's village ).
* **Pet**: Carrot, a male ginger cat curious and always looking for fun and entertainement.
* **Place**: Her house, in the forest of Squirrel's End (a little farmer's village).
* **Pet**: Carrot, a male ginger cat curious and always looking for fun and entertainment.
* **Hobby**: Studying magic law, an inner paradox between trying to understand the mysteries of Chaosah and accepting what's already there.
* **Theme**: Particles, galaxies, black-holes, total-mess, deconstruction, emptyness, fulness, infinity, paradox.
* **Theme**: Particles, galaxies, black-holes, total-mess, deconstruction, emptiness, fulness, infinity, paradox.
* **Family**: Orphaned, educated in the Squirrel's End orphanage.
* **Motivation**: Find respect, love and friends by being the best witch.
* **Known potion/Spell**: Potion of Flight (ep01)
,Potion of growing/shrinking size for her and Carrot (ep05)
,Summoning three demons of Chaosah (book1, Incantations for Demons of Chaosah ) (ep08)
,Laughting Potion (ep12)
,Mega-hairgrowth Potion (ep12)
,"Bright-side" Potion (ep12)
,Smoke Potion (ep12)
,Stink bubbles (ep12)
,Summoning a Chaosahn blackhole (book7, Gravitationnal fields ) (ep12)
* **Known potion/Spell**: Potion of Flight (ep01),
Potion of growing/shrinking size for her and Carrot (ep05),
Summoning three demons of Chaosah (book1, *Incantations for Demons of Chaosah*) (ep08),
Laughing Potion (ep12),
Mega-hairgrowth Potion (ep12),
"Bright-side" Potion (ep12),
Smoke Potion (ep12),
Stink bubbles (ep12),
Summoning a Chaosahn black hole (book7, *Gravitational fields*) (ep12)
# Saffron
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* **Age**: 14
* **Magic**: Kielbasah
* **Place**: Komona, the magic floating tree city, a place of market and rich poeples.
* **Place**: Komona, the magic floating tree city, a place of markets and rich people.
* **Pet**: Truffel, a white angora cat.
* **Hobby**: working to be more rich and famous
* **Theme**: urban, metal, gems, forge, glass, mirrors, shining, rocks, caves.
* **Hobby**: Working to be more rich and famous.
* **Theme**: Urban, metal, gems, forge, glass, mirrors, shining, rocks, caves.
* **Family**: Orphaned, educated in the Komona orphanage.
* **Motivations**: Being the best witch and restore the old name of her magic school to 'Magmah'.
* **Motivations**: Being the best witch and restoring the name of her magic school to 'Magmah'.
* **Episode**: ep01, ep03, ep06, ep09
* **Known potion/Spell**: Potion of Poshness (ep06)
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* **Magic**: Ah
* **Place**: Land of the Setting Moon, nomadic lifestyle in this territory.
* **Pet**: Yuzu, a young two tailed magical fox (kitsune).
* **Hobby**: observing life around, being aware on her role within life.
* **Theme**: other worlds, mystic, ghost, life, regeneration, grow, energy.
* **Hobby**: Observing life around, being aware of her role within life.
* **Theme**: Other worlds, mystic, ghost, life, regeneration, grow, energy.
* **Motivations**: To live a quiet life and die in peace, guided by the unknowable winds.
* **Family**: Selected by Ah.
* **Episode**: ep06, ep09
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* **Place**: Qualicity, an industrial city from the Technologist Union.
* **Pet**: Mango, a black cockerel. He secretly wants to rule the world.
* **Hobby**: Geek who enjoys animating machinery or re-animating the dead.
* **Theme**: industry, Voodoo, Necromancy (death, decomposition, bones, cemeteries), robots, mechanic.
* **Theme**: Industry, voodoo, necromancy (death, decomposition, bones, cemeteries), robots, mechanic.
* **Family**: Princess of Qualicity. Spoiled heavily by her father, the king.
* **Motivation**: Inventing a new kind of magic based on logical and physical law, allowing all people to use magic, not just witches.
* **Episode**: ep06, ep09
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* **Age**: 116
* **Magic**: **Chaosah**
* **Description**: the small and wise leader of the Chaosah witches.
* **Description**: The small and wise leader of the Chaosah witches.
* **Episode**: ep11
* **Known potion/Spell**: She transform herself into the Prince Acren (ep11)
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* **Age**: 56
* **Magic**: **Chaosah**
* **Description**: a psychotic, rigid, tall and thin witch of Chaosah.
* **Description**: A psychotic, rigid, tall and thin witch of Chaosah.
* **Episode**: ep11, ep12
* **Known potion/Spell**: Throwing fire with her eyes (ep11), Spell cancellation (ep12)
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* **Age**: 62
* **Magic**: **Chaosah**
* **Description**: a bon-vivant witch of Chaosah.
* **Description**: A bon-vivant witch of Chaosah.
* **Episode**: ep11
* **Known potion/Spell**: Transformation into a bat (ep11)
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# Prince Acren
* **Age**: 14
* **Episode**: ep11 ( not him, but his appearance )
* **Description**: Prince, and as-yet-uncrowned king of Acren. Orphaned after the death of his parents The King and Queen of Acren (ep11).
* **Episode**: ep11 (not him, but his appearance)
* **Description**: Prince, and as-yet-uncrowned king of Acren. Orphaned after the death of his parents, The King and Queen of Acren (ep11).
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