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Episode 28: The Festivities

Hi!

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After a long time, here is episode 28, the second part of the trilogy of the Coronation of Coriander.

You can read a rendering here: https://www.peppercarrot.com/XYZ/index.php?subfolder=ep28-WIP_en

I'm not someone in real life used to be very active on party and I like the bench in the dark, outside, hearing the music and people having fun from distance. I probably spent myself a lot of time thinking this way during parties. That's a place I like and I hope the one who also like this moments will find that in this episode.

This second part is about how Pepper feels during the party after the Coronation. There is a lot of ingredients mixed here: jealous feelings for friends, not being in mood during a party and family in public event... I also wanted this episode to resolve the jealous relationship Pepper started to develop for Saffron after the magic contest.

The English will need serious improvements; and dialogs maybe more work to sound natural. (eg. I had no idea about how the Press sounds when asking question to Saffron ; or I had no idea how to sound a bit more 'narrator' during the first page). Thank you for your help, I hope you liked this second part.

CHANGELOG

  • 21 December 2018: Initial commit f973a8ad

SCHEDULE

  • 2 January 2019: Beta, call for translations
  • Release during the first week of 2019? ("when it's ready").
Edited by Midgard
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