1. 24 Jul, 2020 1 commit
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      [credits] Add notes for the Polish translation (also: simplify notes taking in info.json) · 42f4cfd1
      David Revoy authored
      This reflect the information transmited in
      ref: #160 (comment 744468)
      by @WorkingWarrior about the previous translation effort; even refactored
      it still deserve a note about the first attempt.
      I tried to wrap my head around the note taking system in info.json template
      with text and author; it is a nice system but a bit too complex for just
      adding a general note about the translation. I added a simple node in [credit]
      named [notes] where paragraph (ideally short lines) can be added to describe
      more accurately the big changes in the history of translation. This case is typical:
      a rewrite from scratch; and a attribution for the previous effort.
      TODO: makes the credit generator + the big table display this notes.
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  9. 09 Jul, 2020 1 commit
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      [ep34] Attempt at a second scenario (v2) · c0092c8f
      David Revoy authored
      - Extending/rewriting first part of V1
      - Get a new ending (keeping in land of Ah)
      - Delete the Gatekeeper part
      - Based on a dialog (pasted under here) by @craigmaloney
      ref: #167
      Distant scene establishing shot
      * Pepper: So that's how I Carrot and I managed to get away
      * Shichimi: Wow, that's an amazing tale.
      Close-up of Pepper and Shichimi
      * Pepper: Yes, but that means I'm out of a job again
      * Shichimi: I think my master might be able to help
      Focus on Shichimi's face
      * Shichimi: She keeps saying we have more work than students, so maybe she could use some help
      * Pepper: Thank you, Shichimi. It's worth a shot
      At the temple of Ah. We see Wasabi behind her desk with papers all over the place. There is nowhere for Pepper to sit. She stands before Wasabi. Shichimi interrupts Wasabi.
      * Shichimi: Master Wasabi, may I introduce my friend ...
      Wasabi looks up at Shichimi with a withering look
      * Wasabi: Shichimi, I told you I'm not to be disturbed right now. Be useful and get me the latest Hippiah report
      * Shichimi: Yes, Ma'am
      Shichimi leaves. Pepper stands nervously. Wasabi doesn't look up.
      * Pepper: Master Wasabi, my name is ...
      * Wasabi: I know who you are. My question is why there is a Chaosah witch in my presence?
      Pepper looks bewildered. Wasabi's eyes meet Pepper's, but her face still points to her work.
      * Pepper (shocked): I... I wanted to ask you for a job
      * Wasabi: A job? What use would I have for a Chaoash witch?
      Wasabi motions over to a shelf. The titles on the books and reports say "Chaosah Witches reports", "Hippiah Witches reports", etc. A long list labeled "Chaosah Witches: Prohibited items" is tacked to the wall. The actual text is unreadable.
      * Wasabi: The rules of the treaty are very clear on what Chaosah Witches may do.
      Closeup of Wasabi's  stern face
      * Wasabi: What do you possibly think you can do for me?
      Focus on Pepper's nervous face
      * Pepper (nervous): I, uh, I'm really good at a lot of things. I've ...
      * Wasabi: Yes, yes, I know. I've seen what you can do.
      Wasabi, close-up. Her face is more relaxed and curious.
      * Wasabi: You're not like the other Chaosah witches, are you?
      * Pepper: ...
      Shot of Wasabi, looking over her desk, not as close as the curious shot above.
      * Wasabi: Tell you what. I need someone to give the gatekeeper a break. This gate hasn't opened in over 300 years.
      Close-up of Wasabi and Pepper
      * Wasabi: Do you think you can handle watching a closed gate?
      * Pepper: Yes ma'am. I'll do my best.
      Pepper goes to leave, both Pepper and Wasabi are in the shot.
      * Pepper (turning around): You're not nearly as mean as Thyme and Cayenne say you are
      Wasabi (glares and gives Pepper the side-eye).
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