Commit 95b6b75e authored by Nicolas Artance's avatar Nicolas Artance

Detail the end

parent f56558a1
......@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ _Coriander: This is it! This is my client's house._
## Page 8
**Panel 35:** A small, classic house is in front of them. It is really far from the modern city. It looks like Pepper's house. We can see a forest behind the house, and a little river to its right.
**Panel 35:** A small, classic house is in front of them. It is really far from the modern city. It looks like Pepper's house. We can see a forest behind the house, and a little river to its right. This river joins an ocean, not far from the house. A little beach can been seen, with many people on it.
**Panel 36:** Pepper seems to be angry.
_Pepper: After all these mysteries, don't go telling me that your client is just a normal person!_
......@@ -138,11 +138,21 @@ _Pepper: After all these mysteries, don't go telling me that your client is just
**Panel 37:** Coriander points to Pepper's hat. Pepper is afraid.
_Coriander: Absolutely not! You can judge for yourself, she is just here!_
**Panel 38:** Pepper and Carrot are surprised. The bat was here the whole time! It's flying around Pepper and Carrot.
**Panel 38:** Pepper and Carrot are surprised. The bat was here the whole time! It bat disappears in an intense magic light. Pepper and Carrot jump.
**Panel 39:** The bat disappears in an intense magic light. Pepper and Carrot jump.
**Panel 39:** A deep dark veil is appearing around the house. We always can see outside the veil, but the light is drastically reduced. A dark silhouette appears, wrapped entirely in a dark cape they hold to hide their face.
**Panel 40:** Pepper and Carrot are on the floor, confused. A young girl took the place of the the bat. She has a very pale skin, mid-long, dark hair, two long canine teeth, wears a black cape and fashionable clothes with a crossed onion on it, and "Blood, death and moon" written on it. She seems very pleased. Coriander has put her bag on the floor and is holding a potion with pride.
## Page 9
**Panel 40:** Close-up on the silhouette. They ask with a disturbing voice.
_Silhouette: You have it?_
**Panel 41:** Close-up on Coriander. She has a challenge face.
_Coriander: Of course._
**Panel 42:** Pepper and Carrot are looking to the conversation with a worrying face.
**Panel 43:** Final large panel. The silhouette throws their cape away, and reveals their identity. It is a young and tall girl, with a very pale skin, mid-long, dark hair, two long canine teeth. She wears a swimsuit, with a vampire on a beach towel, with sunglasses, below a parasol, sipping a glass of blood with a large smile, with a thumbs-up, drawn on it. She also wears sunglasses, and seems to be very pleased. Coriander has put her bag on the floor and is holding a potion with pride. Behind the veil, we can see other girls with swimsuit and beach stuff (buoys, surfboards, parasol, etc) who jump and shake their arms with big smile, looking at the scene. They seem to be friends with the girl who are talking to Coriander. Pepper and Carrot are looking at them with a big confusion. Projectors placed upward the front door enlighten the zone inside the veil.
_Vampire girl: Oh, princess! You are amazing! You already finished it?!_
_Coriander: For sure! This is the best vampire suncream my engineers could create! You can trust its efficiency, because we have tested it extensively, as you asked. The customer is king!_
_Pepper: Don't rely on your first impression, you said? What a curious city!_
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