Commit 3d551fac authored by Nicolas Artance's avatar Nicolas Artance

Update the-present.md

parent 066106fe
...@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ _Shichimi: It is useless..._ ...@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ _Shichimi: It is useless..._
**Panel 9:** Shichimi has a sorry face. **Panel 9:** Shichimi has a sorry face.
_Shichimi: You did a great job. I am sorry to have disturbed you. I am not strong enough..._ _Shichimi: You did a great job. I am sorry to have disturbed you. I am not strong enough..._
**Panel 10:** Suddenly, the door is opened abruptly. Shichimi jumps, and the little spirit disappears for good. A strong voice is heard from the door. **Panel 10:** Suddenly, the door is opened abruptly. Shichimi jumps, and the little spirit disappears for good. A strong voice is heard from the door.
_Voice: SHICHIMI!_ _Voice: SHICHIMI!_
**Panel 11:** Shichimi, scared, turns round carefully. **Panel 11:** Shichimi, scared, turns round carefully.
...@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ _Shichimi: SAFFRON?!_ ...@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ _Shichimi: SAFFRON?!_
## Page 4 ## Page 4
**Panel 14:** Saffron tramps towards Shichimi, with clenched fists. Shichimi tries to hide the cauldron behind her. **Panel 14:** Saffron tramps towards Shichimi, with clenched fists. Shichimi tries to hide the cauldron behind her.
_Saffron: I am very, very angry!_ _Saffron: I am very, very angry!_
_Shichimi: But... but... how did you enter here?!_ _Shichimi: But... but... how did you enter here?!_
...@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ _Shichimi: N... no! And you tried to burn me, so..._ ...@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ _Shichimi: N... no! And you tried to burn me, so..._
**Panel 27:** There is a baby dragon on the ground, in the middle of an opened egg. **Panel 27:** There is a baby dragon on the ground, in the middle of an opened egg.
**Panel 28:** Saffron is surprised. She screams with bright eyes, joining her hands, with a large smile. **Panel 28:** Saffron is surprised. She screams with bright eyes, joining her hands, with a large smile.
_Saffron: OOOOH! A dragon! So cute!_ _Saffron: OOOOH! A dragon! So cute!_
**Panel 29:** Saffron takes the dragon in her arms to cuddle it. Shichimi seems to be dead: no pupils, a little and strange white steam coming out her mouth... like she didn't want someone else to see this dragon... **Panel 29:** Saffron takes the dragon in her arms to cuddle it. Shichimi seems to be dead: no pupils, a little and strange white steam coming out her mouth... like she didn't want someone else to see this dragon...
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