Commit 34e3b22d authored by Nicolas Artance's avatar Nicolas Artance

Took deevad and Alinamethyst remarks into account, before cmaloney one's

parent 3d551fac
......@@ -61,11 +61,11 @@ _Saffron: That's EXACTLY the problem! You've done anything! In a day like that..
_Shichimi: But... apologies for what?!_
**Panel 17:** Saffron continues her theatrical performance. Shichimi has more and more difficulties to hide the cauldron.
_Saffron: I was thinking you were a good friend! But it was a lie! Even Pepper is a better friend than you, now! She didn't forget!_
_Shichimi: But forget what?!_
_Saffron: I was thinking you were a good friend! But it was a lie! Even Pepper is a better friend than you, now!_
_Shichimi: I don't understand what you mean at all!_
**Panel 18:** Saffron starts to generate angry flames. Shichimi starts to lose her balance.
_Saffron: So you really forgot... I want apologies!!_
_Saffron: So you are really serious... I want apologies!!_
_Shichimi: But... but..._
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......@@ -75,15 +75,15 @@ _Saffron: NOW!_
**Panel 20:** Shichimi is straightening, horrified, looking at the cauldron. The fire below is now red and orange as usual. Saffron crosses her arms and turns her nose up, offended.
_Shichimi: ...are you just trying to burn me?!!!_
_Saffron: That's your entire fault! You shouldn't have forgot that..._
_Saffron: That's your entire fault! You shouldn't have..._
**Panel 21:** Saffron notices the cauldron. Shichimi is panicked.
_Saffron: What is in that cauldron?_
_Shichimi: N... nothing!_
**Panel 22:** Saffron tries to look inside. Shichimi tries to prevent her from doing so.
_Saffron: What do you prepare? Is that the cause of your omission?!_
_Shichimi: Omission of what? Don't look at it, please!_
_Saffron: What do you prepare? Is that the cause of you didn't do?!_
_Shichimi: Didn't do what? Don't look at it, please!_
**Panel 23:** A sound of "knock knock" comes from the cauldron. Saffron and Shichimi stop their little fight.
_Saffron: What is that?_
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