Commit 9ab6d968 authored by Craig Maloney's avatar Craig Maloney
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Changing the orphanage to Hippiah School

parent b918249d
......@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ _Pepper_: "... because I found him in a bushel of carrots"
## Scene 2
**Panel 4:** Ispmorphic view of the orphanage of Squirrel's End. Several children are outside playing a game of tag. Over on a bench sits Pepper. She sits alone, looking down
**Panel 4:** Ispmorphic view of the Hippiah school in Squirrel's End. Several children are outside playing a game of tag. Over on a bench sits Pepper. She sits alone, looking down
**Panel 5:** Close-up of Pepper's face. She looks melancholy, as though she wants to play with the other children but nobody will give her the chance.
......@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ _Child 1_: (Carrot like speech bubble for AAAAAAAHHHHH!)
**Panel 17:** Carrot tumbles into a bushel of carrots. Several of them scatter all over the place but he manages to not make a huge mess in the ruckus. Cat-like Ninja reflexes in play.
**Panel 18:** Pepper pulls the hat up from her eyes. Her persecutors are long gone. The staff from the orphanage finally realize something is up and head outside. Pepper looks around.
**Panel 18:** Pepper pulls the hat up from her eyes. Her persecutors are long gone. The staff from the school finally realize something is up and head outside. Pepper looks around.
_Adult 1:_ (Carrot-like speech bubble for exclamation)
......@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ _Adult 2:_ (Carrot-like speech bubble for exclamation)
_Pepper:_ (Carrot-like speech bubble for I found an adorable kitten friend!)
**Panel 20:** Shot of Pepper walking back to the orphanage carrying Carrot slumped over her shoulder. He gives an exhausted and contented smile.
**Panel 20:** Shot of Pepper walking back to the school carrying Carrot slumped over her shoulder. He gives an exhausted and contented smile.
_Carrot_: (Carrot-like speech bubble for "I chose you")
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